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Posts: 78 Join date: 2011-11-18 Age: 19 Location: behind you Humor: ITS PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME!!!!!
 | Subject: Raizo X Fri Nov 18, 2011 10:48 pm | |
| Name: Raizo (last name unknown) Alias: none Birthday/ Age: 09/29/x505 / 20 years old Gender: Male Sexuality: Straight Appearance | Spoiler: | | |  |
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Note: The wrap around Raizo's face can move and shrink so his face can be scene.
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Height: ft' and Inches'': 6ft4inchs
Weight: lbs:180
Personality: Raizo on the outside looks quite scary but he is a man who if you show him respect he will do the same, he cares for his friends, and he wont take insults so nicely. Raizo is always thinking of training and how to get stronger however if he had a girlfriend his focus would be on her and not training.Raizo has a good heart and if he see fit he will protect whom ever needs it. Raizo has a alternate personality that only comes out with he is really angry this personality only want kill, and doesent care about anything else, if this personality were to come out only his closest friend could get him out of this personality.
Likes: Women, beer, training, flying, swimming, he also enjoys partying with his friends on special ocasions
Dislikes and Fears: Raizo dislikes people who are selfish, rude, and have no respect for others. He has a fear of confined space, also raizo dislikes mondays, and he hates the holy order so much so that he will kill anyone that has anything to do with them.
Abilities: Raizo has a massive amount of energy that is inside of him which allows him to use more magic then most, he also has the ability to predict peoples movements physically not magically.
Strenghts: Raizo has two strengths his first is his speed he can move faster than anyone he has ever met because of his lighting magic, and his second is his skills in different fighting styles
Weaknesses: His weakness is long rang attacks, beautiful women, and ice.
Guild
Name: Raizo is not in a guild yet
Tattoo: left shoulder
Magic:
Magic Type: Lightning, and Black flame dragon slayer
Spell name: Secret hidden dragon art the final fist of dragons
Spell Effect: This is Raizo's most powerful and effective attack what it does is with every attack the fire and lightning is seriously compressed and on impact of a object the extra force of the explosion of lightning and fire which would cause serious damage or even in some cases turn a person to ash from he explosion of fire.
Spell Name: Roar of the lightning fire dragon
Spell Effect: This ability combines the roar of a fire dragon and the roar of a lightning dragon into one.
Spell Name: Secret dragon art fire dragons tower
Spell Effect: This ability is the strongest of raizo fire abilities, with this attack a circle thats 25 to 30 feet is formed around his opponent and black flames engulph the circle and shoot upwards at a unknown hight.
Spell Name: Secret dragon art lightning dragons majestic power
Spell Effect: With this ability (takes one post to work) forms clouds over the entire sky and as soon as that happens the entire area starts getting hammered with lightning attacks.
Spell Name: Lightning flame dragons iron fist
Spell Effect: This ability engulphs his hands in black flame's and lightning making his punching alot stronger.
Spell Name: Fire dragons flash over
Spell Effect: This ability heats the air so much that everything in the area around raizo bursts into flames.
Spell name: Lightning dragons dark lightning
Spell effect: with this attack Raizo is able to make black lightning that is stronger and faster then normal lightning
Spell Name: Dragon Force
Spell Effect: This is the legendary dragon force where you become more like a dragon however because its two dragon powers in one, if he uses this magic his entire body will be damaged and he will be nearly dead after using this.
Magic Seal:
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note: half of the seal is black and the other half is lightning yellow
Strenghts: storms, fire, lightning, sun.
Weaknesses: rubber, water, ice, blizzards, snow.
Weapon Name: Dragons blade
Magical Properties: It can cut through magic, however the more stronger magic attacks are harder to cut through and can hurt raizo physically.
Weapon Appearance:
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Note: the white on it is black and the black on it is lightning yellow
Weapon History: (what Raizo knows) This blade was with Raizo when he was found by the two dragons its said it was from his family but no knows for sure. (Real history): This blade was fordged one hundred and fifty years ago, this katana was made out of a metal that was from a metor. The man who found this metal was Raizo's ancestor, when this Raizo's ancestor found it he noticed it had a special ability, it was able to repel magic so when he fordged it into a katana it was able to cut through anything, the ancestor's village was getting attacked by a dragon and this katana was the blade that killed that dragon which is how it got the name dragons blade.
Background Raizo was born in a small village where the holy order had not touched, Raizo parents were nice kind people that respected other and always helped anyone in need. Raizo was only two years old when the holy order attacked their village, Raizo's parents managed to get to a river while running away from the holy order after they destoried the village and killed everyone. The holy order was chasing after them so they put Raizo in big basket with the dragons blade, and a neckless that had his name on it, they then pushed him down the river and ran off it was only ten minutes later when they were killed by the holy order. while floating down river two dragons one of fire and one of lightning saw this basket and picked it up they opened it and looked inside when they saw the baby they looked around for the parents and when they found a village near by and saw it was completly destoried. The dragons saw the holy order there so they figured it was the holy order that killed his parents, when they retured they had to make a choice were they going to keep the child or where they going to give him to someone else. Both dragons agreed to raise this child and make him one of their own, so for fifteen years the dragons raised him and trained him in the lost magic of dragon slayer magic, and how to fight using his katana, and fists. after all this time when he turned seventeen his training was complete. The dragons finally told him about his past, and that he needed to go on his own journey to fight. Raizo then set out on his own journey to learn new things and to completely destory the holy order that was his goal and he was not going to stop till he succeded.
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Posts: 100 Join date: 2010-12-17 Age: 17 Location: Turn Around Humor: Hi
 | Subject: Re: Raizo X Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:38 am | |
| The being able to predict peoples move ments is nice but I worry that could cause trouble in a battle post. So to clarify it is just phsyical movements you can predict meaning if they were using magic you could not predict where it is coming from just to add in some fairness, I am sure that is already what you had planned anyways. And the cutting through and absorbing magic seems a bit unfair ontop of it. so I would suggest you use the cutting through magic. however stronger spells are harder to cut through and take more out of you, not a lot just more. And alot of your spells are really strong so I would expect in post this would reflect on your magic even with a lot of it.
If you don't like my conditions, you give your ideas, and we can try to meet in the middle, I am trying to help you keep a strong character with out being over powering. Oh and you put water for both strengths and weaknesses of your magic so you might want to fix that aswell. Like I said feel free to talk to me we can see what stays and goes together, if you agree with what I say, edit your app to match what is listed above, then just post an approved under these meaning you approve my conditions and therefore..........I approve your app.
Sorry this took so long, We are very thourough when reading apps. ------------------------------  |
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Ðragon-Spirit App. Moderator

Posts: 78 Join date: 2011-11-18 Age: 19 Location: behind you Humor: ITS PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME!!!!!
 | Subject: Re: Raizo X Sat Nov 19, 2011 10:21 am | |
| nah its all good i agree to the terms you have shown |
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Ðragon-Spirit App. Moderator

Posts: 78 Join date: 2011-11-18 Age: 19 Location: behind you Humor: ITS PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME!!!!!
 | Subject: Re: Raizo X Sun Jan 29, 2012 8:11 pm | |
| needs approval again please |
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Plague Admin

Posts: 100 Join date: 2010-12-17 Age: 17 Location: Turn Around Humor: Hi
 | Subject: Re: Raizo X Sun Jan 29, 2012 8:16 pm | |
| Approved just remember with more powerful spells comes more powerful magic drain XD ------------------------------  |
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